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Part 1.
Chu Chu! She heard the train comeing slowly in the dusk os the morning. Where the frigid air rushed againest her bare, icy skin. She was scared and didn't know where she was going, but all she knew was she had to get away. Away where a warn sunny sky welcomed her againest these dark mencing clouds.
Chu Chu! Again she heard the sound of the train getting closer and closer. When it stopped she would get on and start this young girls journey to a new world.
Part 2
All she saw was rolling plains. The green grass and baby blue sky was strange compared to the brick street and gray sky back home but it was a good kind of strange. Not knowing when to get off she decided to get off at the next stop carrying only one simple bag. She got off and looked around. The place was deserted, the wood looked ancient againest the bright sky and green grass around with only a small bench looking capable of only fitting one person in it. She turned around to get back on the train but it had already gone, soundlessly. So she sat on the small wood bench waiting for another train to arrive. Her stomach growled from lack of food but she pushed the pain away, for this 13 year old was clueless for what would happen next.
Part 3
There was but the slightest breeze outside, when she heard someone, something comeing, but didn't dare look back just thinking it was her imagination. Not knowing a little old native american woman was staring blankly at her back about 10 feet away until she turned around to go to the restroom. The little native and 13 year old girl stood there staring at each other not knowing what to say, or even if they could understand eachother. Finally after a long moment of silence the native pronounced herself as the chiefs wife of a little tribe not far from the station. Also explaining that she had com to the station because of the sound of a train and wondered why a train would be comeing to the grassy plains and stop at a old deserted station. Then the girls stomach growled and she could not push the hunger pains away anymore. The woman must have heard it because she invited her over to the tribe for supper. The girl gratefully accepted the invitation.
ok what do you guys think so far. i am only like 1/3 of the way through but i wanted to know if you guys liked it enough you want me to keep going?
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